<p><span style="text-align: justify;">在當今競爭激烈的碩士申請中，一篇出色的文書可以讓申請者脫穎而出。文書是展示</span><strong style="text-align: justify;">個人故事和潛力</strong><span style="text-align: justify;">的窗口，它能夠向招生官傳達獨特性和動力。無論申請中背景如何，有效的文書寫作都可以</span><strong style="text-align: justify;">提升申請成功率</strong><span style="text-align: justify;">。</span></p> <div data-page-id="J2YZdkQXvobYQHxBaZ0czlcvntd" data-docx-has-block-data="true"> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-IJWFdtseioYdTkxIc28ck6QRnEg" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-IJWFdtseioYdTkxIc28ck6QRnEg" style="text-align: justify;">因此，為了提供一些文書寫作思路，我將深入分析一篇學(xué)生碩士申請文書，并分享有關(guān)撰寫出色文書的指導(dǎo)和策略。希望這些寫作的啟示將為接下來的申請者提供寶貴的指引，為碩士申請增添成功的一筆！</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-IJWFdtseioYdTkxIc28ck6QRnEg" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <h1 class="heading-1 ace-line old-record-id-FIqSdmASmomKIoxcjy5cWXb8nnf" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>本科背景</strong></span></h1> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Tg2GdiYEio8wyCxaGklc44N6nXe" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Tg2GdiYEio8wyCxaGklc44N6nXe" style="text-align: justify;"> <div id="item_1712041052681" class="znz-autocompleter-item znz-autocompleter-student type-1" contenteditable="false" data-item-data="{&quot;id_cust&quot;:284672,&quot;name_cust&quot;:&quot;sunyudi&quot;,&quot;cname_cust&quot;:&quot;孫宇頔&quot;,&quot;univ_cust&quot;:&quot;河海大學(xué)&quot;,&quot;major_cust&quot;:&quot;英語&quot;,&quot;eng_cust&quot;:&quot;雅思:6.5(L:6.5/R:8/W:6.5/S:5.5)&quot;,&quot;gpa_cust&quot;:&quot;86.99&quot;,&quot;apply&quot;:&quot;67114&quot;,&quot;college_id&quot;:739,&quot;name&quot;:&quot;S同學(xué)&quot;,&quot;url&quot;:&quot;http://ivjr.cn/college_739&quot;,&quot;applys&quot;:[{&quot;cname_univ_aply&quot;:&quot;香港城市大學(xué)&quot;,&quot;major_cname&quot;:&quot;語言研究文學(xué)碩士&quot;,&quot;sub_aply&quot;:&quot;2022-11-19&quot;,&quot;offer_aply&quot;:&quot;2022-12-20&quot;,&quot;id&quot;:1876,&quot;push_research_time&quot;:&quot;0000-00-00&quot;,&quot;result_aply&quot;:&quot;錄取&quot;,&quot;url&quot;:&quot;http://ivjr.cn/majr_1876&quot;}],&quot;exprience&quot;:&quot;&lt;div class=\&quot;exprience-wrapper\&quot;&gt;\n &lt;div class=\&quot;title\&quot;&gt;\n 主要經(jīng)歷\n &lt;/div&gt;\n &lt;div class=\&quot;detail-wrapper\&quot;&gt;\n &lt;div class=\&quot;operate-wrapper\&quot;&gt;\n &lt;div class=\&quot;add\&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;\n \n &lt;/div&gt;\n \n &lt;div class=\&quot;exprience-item\&quot;&gt;\n &lt;div class=\&quot;label\&quot; 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</span> </span> <span class="card-operate active"> <span class="edit"> &nbsp; </span> <span class="content"> &nbsp; </span> </span> </span></div> <p>&nbsp;</p> </div> <h1 class="heading-1 ace-line old-record-id-RQeGdck48o0OKkxm2Y8c6MLtnff" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>文書解析</strong></span></h1> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OkCuduprwoLUbcxuBPXckFgbnAc" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SCO2d4Oaeoik46xEjbucZthpn2c" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">孫同學(xué)的本科英語專業(yè)申請語言方向，看似與目標學(xué)術(shù)領(lǐng)域高度相關(guān)，因此申請難度相對較低。</span><span style="color: #262626;">然而，孫同學(xué)自身的GPA并不高，科研經(jīng)歷主要以課程論文為主，其含金量相對較低，且僅有一個月的學(xué)校實習(xí)經(jīng)歷。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SCO2d4Oaeoik46xEjbucZthpn2c" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SCO2d4Oaeoik46xEjbucZthpn2c" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">面對這樣的情況，如何突出他的軟實力，挖掘他經(jīng)歷中的亮點，變得尤為重要。為了增加申請成功率，我對其文書有了如下幾個規(guī)劃。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SnP9dhsYgo19nzxGNx0cTVdFnUf" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <h2 class="heading-2 ace-line old-record-id-PWIGdSo0woMQwIxOqIscpmLennc" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>興趣起源：</strong></span></h2> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-GxzUdWFryoAYY9xyoBBcvnmMnWf" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <h4 class="heading-4 ace-line old-record-id-BjwEdKuudoXqUlxz3h5cGtjOnff" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">強調(diào)興趣和熱情：從現(xiàn)代技術(shù)翻譯角度出發(fā)，強調(diào)他對計算機輔助翻譯技術(shù)的思考，以及這一技術(shù)對語言領(lǐng)域的影響，展示他對當代社會發(fā)展的敏銳觀察力和對語言學(xué)領(lǐng)域的熱情。</span></h4> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-MuHNd5LAsotJCRxWZ63c5gwbn0b" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-GU2gdKu0yoaOyaxcnCJcc7DFnQh" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">近幾年翻譯技術(shù)的發(fā)展以及ChatGPT的出現(xiàn)，人工智能對語言領(lǐng)域的影響確實引發(fā)這一領(lǐng)域的思考。作為一名英專生，對計算機輔助翻譯技術(shù)的思考可以體現(xiàn)同學(xué)對當代社會發(fā)展和語言領(lǐng)域的洞察力。因此，我決定從技術(shù)與語言這一角度入手來進行孫同學(xué)興趣起源的寫作。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-UbLvdH6C5o5q4VxarDhcThXjnkF" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <h2 class="heading-2 ace-line old-record-id-AkOwdAssoo4cOwxqGZkc0pwynY2" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>職業(yè)規(guī)劃：</strong></span></h2> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-RtPydVm2RoudmkxlQCgcGCswnTg" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-HwOwdg0gMoQqGWxeilscbQpwnRf" style="text-align: justify;">個人的職業(yè)規(guī)劃與興趣起源是密不可分的，為了讓<span style="color: #262626;"><strong>文書有一條完整的storyline、更具有可閱讀性</strong></span>，我詳細描述了孫同學(xué)希望繼續(xù)讀博的研究方向，即繼續(xù)研究現(xiàn)代技術(shù)對翻譯技術(shù)的影響，以及探索現(xiàn)代技術(shù)是否將會替代人工翻譯。<span style="color: #262626;"><strong>詳細闡述自己的研究興趣</strong></span>不僅可以讓招生官看到申請者想要有更高學(xué)術(shù)追求的決心，還會使文書更具真實性和獨特性。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ZVpjdyEwnojME7xZoQec82vuneb" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-QVNqdAJQ2oaws2xX3BocgsTkncb" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;3cb79443-9be9-48f1-b883-63c4b13444dd&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:524,&quot;width&quot;:1234,&quot;currHeight&quot;:524,&quot;currWidth&quot;:1234,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:524,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:1234,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:1,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FBYPMbwLg0oI4AYx9lAWc9WVFnuf%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;BYPMbwLg0oI4AYx9lAWc9WVFnuf&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/png&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:123955,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><img style="display: block; 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margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/info_imgUrl_phpGn9kgE.jpg" data-znz-article-border="1" /></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BvzgdaZhfovMY5xcfuDczmQYnWb" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <h2 class="heading-4 ace-line old-record-id-Is2qdcQqMo2OW8xyQVwcro7dnQf" style="text-align: justify;"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">實習(xí)經(jīng)歷</span></strong></h2> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FL7Kd6GB8oDsxFxm3Gicy1nNnoh" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-AiHydNdOioTptPxyBYbcWWxHn2f" style="text-align: justify;"><strong>如何將英語教育的實習(xí)經(jīng)歷與語言學(xué)掛鉤？</strong>這是我在撰寫實習(xí)經(jīng)歷時思考的重要問題。語言學(xué)的核心在于探究語言內(nèi)部的規(guī)律。因此，我將一個值得關(guān)注的教育現(xiàn)象--學(xué)校僅注重教授應(yīng)試教育的知識，卻忽視了學(xué)生的語言學(xué)習(xí)需求寫進文書中。并提出了一個觀點，即通過學(xué)習(xí)語言學(xué)知識，學(xué)生能夠了解語言的普遍規(guī)律，并在學(xué)習(xí)過程中具備應(yīng)對不同困難的能力。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-JhE9dOClxoig23xj8aTcSEaXnkc" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-WtVhdcuJ0oR8ZnxQ4VHcLKATnFc" style="text-align: justify;">在文書中提到申請者在教學(xué)中引入一些<strong>基本的語言學(xué)概念</strong>，例如語言結(jié)構(gòu)、語音規(guī)律和詞匯形成原理等，以幫助學(xué)生更好地理解和掌握語言。此外，還提出了一些實踐性的建議，如通過討論語言變化和語言習(xí)得的理論，激發(fā)學(xué)生對語言學(xué)習(xí)的興趣，以及鼓勵他們在寫作和口語表達中運用所學(xué)的語言學(xué)知識。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-D8CbdXSFHokRrKxpVmXc3Vninue" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-YiRqd5ySSoS2tdxppZKckCQwn9c" style="text-align: justify;">通過將實習(xí)經(jīng)歷與語言學(xué)知識的關(guān)聯(lián)進行思考和論述，文書可以突出申請者的專業(yè)性知識和對教育改革的獨特觀點，展示其在英語教育領(lǐng)域的潛力和熱情。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BPGCd4PExoHysUxP4fAcqfaNnBh" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <h2 class="heading-4 ace-line old-record-id-LA0cdOioYo0GgCxoNQHcpavpnFc" style="text-align: justify;"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">Why school 和職業(yè)規(guī)劃</span></strong></h2> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BSNWdg0zNoGIsUxsdiccPDA4njh" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OcmKd4SQ8oM2qQxCuzBcnL4wnlg" style="text-align: justify;">有了實習(xí)經(jīng)歷的鋪墊，why school的出現(xiàn)就十分合理了----因為發(fā)現(xiàn)大多數(shù)學(xué)校教師不會在教英語的過程中補充語言學(xué)知識，所以希望在碩士階段學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)知識，從而在未來改變這一現(xiàn)象。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-EiYUdsKVtoQetUxbNyxcL7zEnJe" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-A9qSdEdM6oty95xOdQDcFJSFnOb" style="text-align: justify;">得知該同學(xué)獲得了理想的offer，我感到非常高興。這進一步證實了即使學(xué)生背景一般，通過有效的文書寫作，也能顯著提高他們的申請成功率。這激勵著我繼續(xù)思考如何幫助學(xué)生構(gòu)思文書的結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容，以便幫助更多的學(xué)生成功獲得他們期望的錄取通知書。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-A9qSdEdM6oty95xOdQDcFJSFnOb" style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-A9qSdEdM6oty95xOdQDcFJSFnOb" style="text-align: justify;">我深信，通過不斷的探索和努力，我將能為更多的學(xué)生提供有價值的指導(dǎo)，并共同追求他們的申請目標。</div> </div> <div class="qrcode-content-wrapper" contenteditable="false"> <div style="position: absolute; 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