<p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">我們的許多學員在準備不同方向申請項目的個人陳述時，基于同一段經(jīng)歷準備的寫作素材大都是一樣的，往往是對于科研或者實習內(nèi)容的羅列，而忽略了不同項目的側重點。為此，<strong>我認為針對同一經(jīng)歷在不同申請方向的PS中，應當基于申請項目內(nèi)容來深入挖掘其經(jīng)歷，從而呈現(xiàn)出與申請項目相契合的內(nèi)容。</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">香港中文大學的Master of Accountancy（MAcc）在業(yè)內(nèi)一直享有很高的認可度，并擁有豐富的校友資源。項目設置了兩部分課程，一部分是特意為非會計學位學生設計的可以滿足職業(yè)資格考試的可轉換課程；另一部分課程則是會計知識的深化，幫助學生將其運用到實踐中去。項目還提供了Accounting Analytics分支，培養(yǎng)學生數(shù)據(jù)分析和商業(yè)分析技能，選擇此分支的學生需要修5門該分支選修課。</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><br /><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">今天<strong>#心動的文書#</strong>欄目，老師就跟大家分享一下對于這個項目的PS書寫，同學們?nèi)绾瓮ㄟ^描寫自己的經(jīng)歷來突出自己的優(yōu)勢，表達自己對該專業(yè)和未來的熱情和追求，從而吸引招生官呢？（<strong>下劃線加粗為好詞好句，大家可以收藏積累哦~</strong>）</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <h1 style="text-align: center;"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong><span class="h1">01 PS Sample</span></strong></span></h1> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">Once perceiving accounting merely as the bookkeeping job, it was not until I received systematic training in this field that I recognized its mainstay role in the rapidly evolving business society. Judging from my undergraduate and ACCA curriculum, it requires not only practitioners&rsquo; accurate understanding and flexible application of the existing standards to maximize corporate interests but also their adeptness at planning, control, decision-making, etc., to provide executives with effective economic information.<strong>【本科會計專業(yè)的學習刷新了我對行業(yè)的認知】</strong>On the one hand, it is necessary that we conduct multidisciplinary exploration in related sectors to draw on the proficiency of different subjects smoothly. On the other hand, we ought to sharpen our data processing and analyzing skills to further <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>penetrate financial phenomena</strong></span>. Therefore, I am applying for your program to equip myself with more professional competence and realize my value to the fullest extent.<strong>【基于專業(yè)認識和趨勢洞察，&ldquo;我&rdquo;希望通過研究生學習提升跨學科和數(shù)據(jù)分析技能，以滿足不斷進化的行業(yè)需求】</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">這一段興趣起源圍繞對專業(yè)的探討而展開，由&ldquo;觀察&rdquo;深入到&ldquo;思考&rdquo;，由&ldquo;趨勢&rdquo;引申到&ldquo;需求&rdquo;，體現(xiàn)申請者對于專業(yè)的深刻理解和職業(yè)驅(qū)動的申請動機。</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><br /><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">Though it took me some time during my undergraduate study to adapt to the competitive environment, I have managed notable progress in GPA through diligence and enthusiasm.<strong>【針對申請者自身前期績點不夠理想的問題特別進行解釋說明，突出通過努力提高績點的過程】</strong>Based on my bilingual study of financial accounting at school, which helped me understand the knowledge system comparatively, I self-studied ACCA F3 &amp; F7 to better prepare for further study. Through courses on managerial accounting and ACCA F2 &amp; F5, I familiarized myself with the processing and significance of the crux of business budget, control, and decision. And under the guidance of my foreign professor, I mastered contract law and tort law to analyze the behavior of the defendant and the plaintiff in different cases on a legal basis.<strong>【既強調(diào)專業(yè)技能也強調(diào)外語能力和法律基礎】</strong>Besides, I also grasped the models and methods for enterprise valuation and applied them in a course paper and Huawei Finance Competition. Given <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>the overwhelming trend of globalization</strong></span>, I worked hard to score prominently in the elective courses on economics, finance, and management <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>to consolidate my interdisciplinary grounding</strong></span> and cultivate my global vision. This is also an effort to achieve my ambition of becoming a financial expert in foreign businesses at Huawei.<strong>【個性化內(nèi)容：跨專業(yè)的商科能力和國際視野+提前點出在華為擔任外事專家的職業(yè)目標】</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">因為專業(yè)非常對口且申請者本身本科學習收獲豐，PS的第二段不同于一般文書寫作思路，加長了學術背景總結的篇幅。學習能力、專業(yè)功底、跨學科意識和努力、外語技能和全球思維等，到此為止申請者已為自己打造出了這些醒目的人設標簽。</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">Tip：寫PS時一般不建議在總結本科積累時占用過長篇幅&mdash;&mdash;一來成績單是最直觀的呈現(xiàn)，二來第二段長篇大論也會顯得頭重腳輕。但像這樣申請者有獨特感悟可以給個性化元素大大加分的情況可以特殊情況特殊處理。</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">In response to the growing significance of data-based problem-solving ability, I took part in MCM and chose Problem C - Trading Strategies according to our background. In charge of modeling, I initially constructed a short-term non-linear planning strategy, including fees, which, however, performed less satisfyingly in long-term transactions.<strong>【兩句話簡明扼要交代競賽背景、個人任務和研究困難】</strong>Therefore, after consulting relevant papers and materials, I employed spectral decomposition in econometrics to construct long-term trading strategies based on the short-term ones. Concerning the high risk of Bitcoin assets, I associated with the risk-benefit viewpoints learned in Financial Risk Management, with volatility as a risk measure.<strong>【解決困難：譜分解模型+風險-收益觀點構建長期模型】</strong>Finally, we obtained the long-term risk-benefit optimization model, which won us the Meritorious Winner award, ranking top 7% globally. In retrospect, I <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>deepened my insight into</strong></span> managerial and operational risk management studies and became <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>more conversant with</strong></span> some financial and economic models. As I honed my modeling techniques and data sensitivity, I am now more confident in my multidisciplinary study and practice in the graduate stage to facilitate my financial analysis and business decision-making.<strong>【成果和收獲：M獎以及由此帶來的風險管理、數(shù)分、建模等方面的能力提升。同時再次點到跨學科能力的關鍵詞】</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">這段美賽獲獎經(jīng)歷含金量較高，展示的過程中圍繞交易策略的構建過程突出申請人優(yōu)秀的財務分析、商業(yè)決策技能和硬技能支撐的發(fā)展?jié)摿Α?lt;/span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">To <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>bridge the gap between theoretical acquisition and real-world practice</strong></span>, I served as a tax intern at the Xiamen Branch of PwC, engaged in providing tax advisory services to client companies to keep their strategies and decisions in line with tax standards. In lack of both a taxation foundation and working experience in an English-speaking environment, I encountered multiple difficulties.<strong>【實習經(jīng)歷同樣具備高含金量，但高要求的工作環(huán)境也意味著許多前所未有的挑戰(zhàn)&mdash;&mdash;稅務基礎和英文工作環(huán)境】</strong>Confronted with plenty of terms I had not heard of, I made full use of my working and leisure time to consult authentic websites such as State Taxation Administration and Shui5.cn to resolve my confusion. Once, I even called the local tax service hotline to truly comprehend specific tax rules and related preferential conditions.<strong>【對策一：刨根問底的學習態(tài)度】<span style="text-decoration: underline;">Leveraging strategic learning methods</span></strong>, I organized all the useful information in Excel and sorted out the key points of a standard, such as the conditions for a company to move into the Qianhai Pilot Free Trade Zone in Shenzhen. According to the information I concluded from the aspects including access scope, necessary materials and formalities, precautions, etc., I could respond to the varying demands of the client through my logical analysis targeted at their actual status.<strong>【對策二：策略性的學習方法】</strong>Starting almost from scratch, I kept up with the rapid pace here in this brand-new surroundings step by step, and in turn, strengthened my independent learning ability. Supported by the advanced knowledge and communication know-hows I acquired, I am more likely to stand out in the workplace as well upon the completion of my academic journey.<strong>【總結收獲：抗壓能力、學習能力、專業(yè)能力和交流能力的全面提升】</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">這段實習經(jīng)歷并沒有局限于申請者某個專業(yè)知識技能的深入或提高，而是對照總起句&ldquo;銜接理論學習和現(xiàn)實應用&rdquo;突出申請人硬實力和軟技能的綜合性進步，體現(xiàn)出對專業(yè)問題的現(xiàn)實理解，以及職場場景下抵抗壓力解決問題的重要能力。這也是職業(yè)導向申請動機的一個強化。</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">Tips：PS中重點經(jīng)歷的展示采取不同的角度、不同的側重點也是文書個性化的重要方法</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">Combined with my current strengths and weaknesses, as well as my career objectives, I consider your program the optimal choice for me to <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>pave the way to a challenging occupation</strong></span>. Firstly, if I had the honor to enroll, the comprehensive training in financial accounting, managerial accounting, taxation, and audit would supplement my theoretical structure. In addition to the instructive core courses, your wide range of electives allows students&rsquo; academic preferences to delve into a specific pathway in the financial domain. Secondly, by virtue of your robust teaching faculty and abundant educational resources, I would <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>glean forefront accounting ideas and industrial experience </strong></span>under the guidance of balanced digitalized and financial instructions.<strong>【&ldquo;數(shù)字化+財經(jīng)&rdquo;的培養(yǎng)側重點】</strong>Last but not least, in Hong Kong, I would be physically closer to the Huawei headquarters in Shenzhen and get in touch with more first-hand information.<strong>【結合職業(yè)目標，香港地理優(yōu)勢顯著】</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">在擇校原因部分突出申請人對項目的了解，并且和職業(yè)規(guī)劃相結合，表明對項目的熱情和申請的動機。</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="color: #262626;">According to my long-term planning of qualifying as a financial expert, I need to secure a position at a leading accounting term in China to upgrade my hard and soft competence in the short term. In around five years, I plan to intensively accumulate professional and practical savvy and pass CPA examinations. Then, in the long run, I will <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>strive for</strong></span> my ideal position at Huawei, a leading digital enterprise with a multi-dimensional segmentation in its financial business involving accounts, funds, tax management, and so on. Thriving in such a large platform with well-known digital efficiency and systemic innovation, I will <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>refine my expertise in a specific direction during extensive exploration</strong></span>. Ultimately, I hope to play a role in the stable development and profitability of the company through my <span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>transnational business sophistication</strong></span> from a global perspective.<strong>【職業(yè)規(guī)劃采取逆推的邏輯，在展開前文說明的長期職業(yè)規(guī)劃前先有條理地羅列出短期所應當作出的努力?！?lt;/strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <h1 style="text-align: center;"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong><span class="h1">02 總結</span></strong></span></h1> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;"><span class="p">這個項目在業(yè)內(nèi)認可度極高，因此在撰寫PS時除了突出申請人最核心的技能之外也不要忽略了綜合素質(zhì)的展現(xiàn)。在標化背景相似的情況下申請者的個性化的特征，比如跨專業(yè)能力、全球思維等等，不斷展現(xiàn)優(yōu)勢，讓自己成為獨一無二的候選人。</span></span></p> <div class="qrcode-content-wrapper" contenteditable="false">&nbsp;</div>