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指南者留學(xué) 史義梅
2024年04月29日
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">中式英語（Chinglish）指帶有漢語詞匯、語法、表達(dá)習(xí)慣的英語，是一種具有中國特色的語言。</span></p>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-LxXqdsblHoV9coxUvwDc6Jrenle"><span style="color: #262626;">在使用英語時(shí)，因受漢語思維方式或文化的影響而拼造出不符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣的，具有中國特征的英語。這是中國人在學(xué)習(xí)英語過程中出現(xiàn)的，是必然的一種語言現(xiàn)象。本文總結(jié)了幾種常見中式英語（Chinglish）的特點(diǎn)，從而幫助讀者能寫出更加規(guī)范和正宗的英語。</span></div>
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<h1 class="heading-7 ace-line old-record-id-OSShdIT5Oo4N9yxaQADcZNEWnOu"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>Part One: 詞匯</strong></span></h1>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BSyuduljRo0iCXxQnjDcdUbdneh"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>核心要義</strong>：“如果一個(gè)詞在句子中沒有發(fā)揮任何作用，那它就應(yīng)該被刪掉”。</span></div>
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<h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-LoKqdSYtUoNOJPxwcNsc55mUngf"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">名詞</span></strong></h2>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>1、形容詞+名詞</strong>，有時(shí)候可以用單個(gè)名詞表達(dá)；</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Competitive <strong>advantages</strong> After: Competitiveness</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before：<strong>shinning points </strong>After：strengths</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>2、抽象名詞</strong>通常是不必要的，要多加觀察和思考；</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before：Consumption <strong>pattern </strong>After: Consumption 消費(fèi)（模式）</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: assignment about the<strong> ethics case </strong>After: assignment on <strong>ethics </strong>道德倫理（情況）</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">句子中其他成分里已經(jīng)<strong>包括了一個(gè)名詞的含義</strong>，這個(gè)名詞就是多余的;</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Driven by the curiosity <strong>of finding the answers</strong>. After: Driven by curiosity</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">注意 some<strong> noun of noun</strong> 這種結(jié)構(gòu), 可以直接noun+noun</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: the structure of each language After： language structure</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: refer to <strong>materials of the company </strong>After: refer to the company’s materials</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: behavioural patterns of human beings After: human beings’ behavioural patterns</span></div>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>3、地道用詞</strong></span></p>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before：research<strong> attitude </strong> After：research mindset</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: past twenty years After: last two decades</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: learning enthusiasm After: aptitude</span></div>
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<h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-DRhvdkzb7ouX12xt4XkcFtZSntg"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>動(dòng)詞</strong></span></h2>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>1、萬能動(dòng)詞 + 名詞</strong></span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FA2odwqekoHdNMxuar5cXXn3n6b"><span style="color: #262626;">此處動(dòng)詞之所以多余是因?yàn)樗麄儧]能承擔(dān)「相應(yīng)的動(dòng)作」，反而這種責(zé)任是由后面名詞完成的，因此不如直接把后面的<strong>名詞給動(dòng)詞化</strong>。這些動(dòng)詞是易錯(cuò)對(duì)象：make，have，give，achieve，conduct, carry out；</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before：Tang Yubing prefers to<strong> make exhaustive analysis</strong> research from different angles.</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OE88dHkVEoxa38x1QtjcXF59nTc"><span style="color: #262626;">After：Tang Yubing prefers to<strong> exhaustively analyze</strong> research from different angles.</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>2、多余動(dòng)詞+多余名詞 （+第三個(gè)詞）</strong></span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-CoAddO8kpovUKlxW61DcMnMInfc"><span style="color: #262626;">此時(shí)，不僅動(dòng)詞沒能表達(dá)特定含義，連后面的名詞也放棄治療了，導(dǎo)致這一個(gè)動(dòng)詞和一個(gè)名詞表達(dá)的含義都十分模糊。那么，只能<strong>由第三個(gè)詞</strong>來承擔(dān)表示確切含義的責(zé)任。</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: reach the goal of modernization After: to modernize</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>3、動(dòng)詞+動(dòng)詞 可以直接動(dòng)詞替換</strong></span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-I7ytdvId4oTa8QxDvZYcOX9Inef"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>Before: </strong>Another unforgettable experience <strong>let me see </strong>the pivotal role of in-depth study of Chinese culture.</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-AqXbdVgVnoVLoKxwyFScD7Ainjf"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong> After: </strong>Another unforgettable experience<strong> exposed </strong>me to the pivotal role of in-depth study of Chinese culture.</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>4、地道用詞</strong></span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before：<strong>Study </strong>management After：Major in management</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before：<strong>see </strong>a bigger world After：discover a bigger world</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before:<strong> add </strong>managerial knowledge After:<strong> </strong><strong>improve</strong> managerial knowledge</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: I<strong> feel </strong>delighted to recommend Miss LI After: I <strong>am</strong> delighted to recommend Miss LI</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: I was pleased to<strong> know </strong>that Li <strong> </strong> After: I was pleased to <strong>discover</strong> that Li<strong> </strong></span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>1、冗余修飾詞</strong> </span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">某些修飾詞的含義已經(jīng)<strong>蘊(yùn)含于被修飾詞</strong>中</span></div>
<div> </div>
<div><span style="color: #262626;">His <strong>own</strong> opinions (如果不是用于特別強(qiáng)調(diào)是「他」的，就是多余的)</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">His <strong>individual</strong> views</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>valuable</strong> asset (a person or thing that is <strong>valuable </strong>or useful to somebody/something)</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">my <strong>deeper </strong>exploration (不用比較級(jí)的情況下是可接受的)</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ESsvdtdo0o2f6pxKNYDcjE8pnbv"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>時(shí)間副詞</strong>：有些動(dòng)詞已經(jīng)暗含時(shí)間狀態(tài)了</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>Previously</strong>...we used to</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>2、程度詞 往往會(huì)在情緒、主動(dòng)性上使用過度</strong></span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">her <strong>stunning </strong>success</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>Heated </strong>debate</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: extremely important After: essential</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: absolutely want to After: were determined to</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: after <strong>actively</strong> communicating with the other students in class <strong>discussions</strong></span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ZWt8dapg0of1scxLX8UcvhORnEh"><span style="color: #262626;">After: after lively discussions with his classmates</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">to <strong>successfully </strong>accomplish</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">felt <strong>very </strong>honoured</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">It is <strong>quite </strong>important to ....</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">The impact will be <strong>quite </strong>huge</span></div>
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<h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-SOyId27wkobNRIxFIZ3cBlTknZb"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">代詞</span></strong></h2>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BHGWdVnpBogDTzx1WEVcUFZTn7e"><span style="color: #262626;">中式英語中代詞也是最容易被用錯(cuò)的一類詞。漢語里代詞的劃分其實(shí)不如英語多，因此，英語中有些代詞在漢語中并沒有明確的翻譯方法，Chinglish中就會(huì)出現(xiàn)很多代詞使用不正確的現(xiàn)象。</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OshJd4ju1oYNkxxiI4VcVbzOnRb"><span style="color: #262626;">但代詞的正確用法其實(shí)也非常簡(jiǎn)單，一言以蔽之就是：每個(gè)代詞必須指向一個(gè)先行詞，即代詞是指代的誰。</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-QEMYdnJkloHeI3xe7n5cIGuGnMg"><span style="color: #262626;">每個(gè)代詞所替代的，就是那個(gè)先行詞了。而先行詞的正確用法為：要被明確寫出、無二義、與代詞近、語法正確。</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: I will take advantage of your well-designed modules, especially <strong>those </strong>combine music, film, and audio technologies closely, such as Creating with Technology, Sound Shaping Design, Audiovisual Composition, Field recording etc. (those后面接的是一個(gè)句子，缺少關(guān)系代詞）</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-B68Zdf363oYId0x1AdPc1KMmnwb"><span style="color: #262626;">After: I will take advantage of your well-designed modules, especially <strong>those that </strong>combine music, film, and audio technologies closely, such as Creating with Technology, Sound Shaping Design, and Audiovisual Composition, Field recording etc.</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Besides, Reid School of Music is equipped with Alison House, Reid Studio, two 360 audio mixing spaces and other advanced hardware and software equipment, <strong>which </strong>are conducive to sound studies. (指代不明）</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OgfLdCmMBo7wHzxNI3Bc0qGmn7b"><span style="color: #262626;">After: The Reid School of Music is equipped with Alison House, Reid Studio, two 360 audio mixing spaces and other advanced hardware and software equipment, <strong>all of which</strong> will be assets to my studies.</span></div>
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<h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-KDOEducvXo4Cskx5inncYsRZnYd"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">冗余雙生詞</span></strong></h2>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-TagTdG1v4oCWrMxGRz2clJxvnmP"><span style="color: #262626;">兩個(gè)含義相同的詞并列使用，雖在中文中能加強(qiáng)語氣避免歧義，但英語中完全是不必要的。</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">因此，要注意第二個(gè)詞是否真的補(bǔ)充了第一個(gè)詞的含義，以及只有一個(gè)詞是否就能恰當(dāng)?shù)乇磉_(dá)原文意思，再對(duì)這類錯(cuò)誤進(jìn)行甄別。</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>如何消除冗余</strong></span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-PTxmdsVsdoZHJSxRfyWcv8tWnDh"><span style="color: #262626;">最簡(jiǎn)單的方法是：刪去其中一個(gè)，或選另外一個(gè)詞替換這倆詞。若這種方法不能達(dá)到等價(jià)替代的效果，則對(duì)原有表達(dá)進(jìn)行擴(kuò)充，使其含義更精確。</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>help and assistance</strong></span></div>
<div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div>
<div><span style="color: #262626;">in a clear <strong>logic and rigorous </strong>structure</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">showed their <strong>doubt and objection</strong> to my decision</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>preciseness and rigor</strong></span></div>
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<h1 class="heading-7 ace-line old-record-id-EbDqdTuyYoBrQExlCTQcSu0rnwg"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>Part Two: 句子</strong></span></h1>
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<h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-Er12dg6F3oGyj1xxcjhc0Pb4nUf"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">從句贅余</span></strong></h2>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-HgT7db4O4ouPmdxem8WcLA9rn9d"><span style="color: #262626;">在英文中，一句話能講清楚的盡量不要借助從句讓中心思想變得模糊不清。</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-S4TxdNSGooh1FEx6gGWc9R05nWc"><span style="color: #262626;">處理方法：針對(duì)冗長(zhǎng)的句子，可以分成簡(jiǎn)單句或者非謂語動(dòng)詞的形式。</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Driven by my professional aspirations, I set my goal of studying economics at the postgraduate courses, <strong>for which I have made various preparations.</strong></span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-JwxUdxBG8o90HKxqg7xcEzDKnmf"><span style="color: #262626;">After: Driven by my professional aspirations,<strong> I have made great efforts to achieve my goal of </strong>studying economics at postgraduate level.</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OnzGdk3meoUfKRxuyWfcqEhEnUd"><span style="color: #262626;">「make preparations」就是為了獲得研究生學(xué)習(xí)的資格，和「goal」表意一致可以合并，無需從句</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Among all subjects,<strong> I showed a preference for English, which</strong> is also the subject I am best at and most willing to spend time on.</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-IzMidFMiqo85Kvx74xkc3GBGnzh"><span style="color: #262626;">After: During my school years,<strong> </strong><strong>I always enjoyed and excelled at</strong> studying English.</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SQ1PdsPiVoMFk2xw96Ac1VxcnMh"><span style="color: #262626;">受「中式表達(dá)」的影響，把「喜歡和擅長(zhǎng)」英語講的太復(fù)雜了</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Despite<strong> the fact that </strong>my major at that time was Management of Cultural Industries, I did not want my exploration in finance to just stop there.</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-S66TdzJMeoAIf3xxMOccfzOZn5f"><span style="color: #262626;">After: Despite my major at the time being Management of Cultural Industries, I did not want my exploration of finance to just stop there.</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-HVoZdPYu6ohjzQxEU9VcO9vunIh"><span style="color: #262626;">「despite+名詞」完全ok</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: …, my independent research and technical leadership skills were also greatly strengthened<strong>, which</strong> gave me the confidence to take harder challenges in the postgraduate period. (一句話60個(gè)詞)</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-UL6TduyjIorcCcxoQkZcfPW5n9d"><span style="color: #262626;">After: …, my independent research and technical leadership skills were also greatly strengthened. <strong>These experiences</strong> have given me the confidence to take on harder challenges in the postgraduate period.</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FUZKdfGTroUIobxBq8ccwBUnn1d"><span style="color: #262626;">通過拆成兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，分別突出個(gè)人技能和它們對(duì)深造的幫助。</span></div>
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<h2 class="heading-8"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">平行結(jié)構(gòu)</span></strong></h2>
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<div class="heading-8"><span style="color: #262626;">其實(shí)就是那些最常見的 and/or 連接兩個(gè)從句的結(jié)構(gòu)。而使用這種「排比」方法時(shí)，需要保證幾部分都具有相同的語法成分（跟對(duì)對(duì)聯(lián)、寫詩一樣）。</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: I have observed his diligence and intelligence, and been sure that he would be a qualified candidate for your program. （前后不對(duì)稱）</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-NtupdHY6kotx6rxf2EMc89R3nYc"><span style="color: #262626;">After: The diligence and intelligence he displayed during his time as my colleague makes him an excellently qualified candidate for your program。</span></div>
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<h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-THCudANdFoyncjxF8D4cxU7onAh"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">邏輯連接</span></strong></h2>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-NgwGd46cqotL6Ox25bxc1zsUnJe"><span style="color: #262626;">語句成分之間的連接（如also, in addition）在漢語中其實(shí)經(jīng)常被忽略，去掉這些邏輯連接成分可能在漢語中無足輕重，但許多時(shí)候，這些成分往往是英語中比較關(guān)鍵的地方。英語中這些成分一定要「顯式」地寫出來。</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: During our contact, I have been fully convinced of her personal quality and ability,<strong> which I believe </strong>will make her a deserving candidate for you.</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Hxk3dUOiXojA6ixl9FPc1tBxnzf"><span style="color: #262626;">After: During the time I have known Yanying, I have always been impressed by both her personal and professional qualities, <strong>therefore I believe</strong> she is a deserving candidate for your master’s program.</span></div>
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<h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-U6HMdaoIkoPHmExF6d1cSofqnEf"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">開篇太虛</span></strong></h2>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-EnysdZQFeoCEx5x0GGdcZRSknVU"><span style="color: #262626;">漢語通常不把主要觀點(diǎn)放在句子開頭，而是把寫作目的、地點(diǎn)、原因、事例或現(xiàn)狀放在主題句，作為引言。但是這將削弱主要觀點(diǎn)的重要性，使得讀者認(rèn)為作者沒有直接切題。因此，主要的觀點(diǎn)一定要將其放在句子的最開始部分，其后再陳述地點(diǎn)、原因等。</span></div>
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<div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: <strong>To be specific, being interested in sound design,</strong> I hope to pursue further studies in this domain to prepare myself for my future career path.</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-T52ZdxmE8oPUSDxyo3ycf8Benoh"><span style="color: #262626;">After: I also hope to pursue further studies in order to prepare myself for my future career path.</span></div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ABBCddJ3ooDJsLxlH4YcXH3WnIb"><span style="color: #262626;">總而言之，中式英語通常因受到漢語的影響，導(dǎo)致在單詞選擇、句子結(jié)構(gòu)和表達(dá)方式上與英語習(xí)慣不符。本文從詞匯和句子兩部分分析了中式英語的常見錯(cuò)誤，并提供了改正后的例子。旨在幫助讀者通過識(shí)別和改正中式英語的特點(diǎn)，提升英語寫作的規(guī)范性和地道性。</span></div>
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